5-I gotta admit, writing about an “empty bathroom” in an amusement park was kinda odd for me lol. and you are right on there not being dual-sex bathroom for changing, but keep in mind that Lea is still only 4 but could easily be seen as 3ish, so having a child that young in, say a male rest room, wouldn’t really cause strife.

6- you are once again lol my mistake ^^

7-for both words my Microsoft Word always places that stupid underline thing until I actually separate them >:( I should’ve checked the two before posting em on here. you are undoubtedly right sir Casper.

Oh yeah, don’t worry about “being anal” as you put it lol. I really appreciate the criticism you added to your comment. Thanks again everyone for still believing in my story! I hope to post chapter 10 soon enough^^